Dan Kennedy – Sales Letter Copy Should Be So Compelling That Length Doesn’t Matter

The following is an article from Dan Kennedy’s blog, but it explains why sales material should never be limited to a certain length or time. Learning how to write compelling copy should be a top priority for any marketer or business owner.

Watching The Clock

By: Dan Kennedy on: June 9th, 2009
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The ‘secret’ reason long copy usually out-sells brief copy, and lengthy sales letters out-sell short ones is simply time. The longer the prospect stays in my store…

The more time he invests in my proposition, the more likely he is to buy.

The best catalogs are designed to keep the person paging through them for the longest possible amount of time. The best stores keep customers in them for the longest period of time possible – which the FAO Schwartz store in Vegas has tackled many different ways; three floors, slow escalators with brilliantly conceived signage that sells, the opportunity to buy 30-minute use cards to play all the games on the 3rd floor, the environment itself, a maze of specialty stores within the stores, salespeople who engage you (not clerks), even a soda fountain and sandwich/snack counter, so you need not leave for food. The best sales letters keep the reader reading for as long as possible. It’s why we use multi-media: letter, CD or DVD — it expands the amount of time the prospect invests with us. The best web sites are designed to involve the visitor and keep him there.

I’m amused when clients fall into the grip of competent technicians who are marketing nincompoops. The fools tell the clients that their sales videos should be no more than seven minutes long, audio CDs ten minutes at most. In one of my business fields, professional speakers are even fed this nonsense: keep your demo reel short. All the opposite of the ideal:

find ways to create so much interest

the person will stay with you, keep listening,

keep watching, keep reading.

The more time invested, more likely to buy.

In good old fashioned nose to nose, toes to toes, mug to mug selling, first in peoples’ living rooms, then B2B, in offices, I quickly learned what many such sales warriors know: likelihood of closing goes up in 15-20 minute increments. If I’m there for 2 hours, I’m not twice as likely to close as if there for only 1 hour, I’m three to four times more likely to close. That’s why the in-home guy selling pots ‘n pans or encyclopedias, etc. unpacks and has stuff strewn all over the place; it expands the time he’s there.

Of course, you can overstay welcome, unsell the made sale. In each selling situation — on stage, face to face, in a tele-seminar, in print, online, etc. — there is a specific “sweet spot” where sales peak; stop short or go long, suffer. For my basic

Magnetic Marketing’ speech, it was 90 minutes. I could get good results in as little as 70, up to 120. Less than 70 or more than 120, the sales drop off dramatically. But for the most part, most people stop way, way short of the point where maximum sales occur.

There is link between time invested and likelihood of buying.

The highest earning auto salesman I’ve ever known always took prospects to his office first, for conversation; then out to look at cars; then to test drive; then back to the office. Why not right out to look at cars? 15 more minutes. That’s why.

But what about…

Today’s shorter attention spans.

Age differences – younger buyers, shorter attention spans

My customer’s different… ..he’s very busy, won’t read a book…

Blah, blah, blah.

Look, all these things are real. Yes, today, everybody’s busier, there are fewer readers and fewer people reading as a matter of course, younger buyers do have shorter attention spans. But the correct answer is not to sacrifice what’s effective, not to merely surrender. The answer is to be more interesting and compelling.

A few years ago, ABC-TV was in the dumper. Fourth of the four networks, no hits. And series TV had given way to modular TV. Shows like CSI, CSI Miami, CSI New York, CSI Poughkeepsie, LAW & ORDER, LAW & ORDER SVU, LAW & ORDER CI, LAW & ORDER PMS, etc. are all designed so you do NOT need to follow them week after week. The story line begins and ends in each show. Each episode is self-contained and free-standing. And because of their success (as well as, admittedly, higher syndication longevity and value), the prevailing viewpoint in network television was that episodic, serial shows were dead. ABC, desperate for a breakthrough, went contrarian – and hits have emerged that are, in fact, serial: Desperate Housewives and Boston Legal, Sunday night winners.

My point is simply this: it’s less about modular or serial, as it is about interesting and compelling. And purely in terms of sales effectiveness, who’s evidencing greater power? — the writers, actors, etc. behind a show so fascinating viewers calendar it and make a point of being home to watch each episode, or those whose viewers feel comfortable with missing an episode?

Sometimes we are legitimately constrained by weight for a direct-mail piece, or space in print advertising, the 28 minute limit for the infomercial. But more often, marketers unnecessarily imprison themselves, with self-imposed time limits far short of their real time limits for their sales presentation and the prospect’s buying experience.

Sometimes we are legitimately constrained by very practical operational considerations. In my old seminar business, selling to chiropractors, dentists, podiatrists, optometrists and veterinarians, we found the 3 hour evening seminar far easier to get attendance for than the full day, and it allowed the speaker to travel each A.M., work every P.M., thus fitting five seminars and five cities into five days (vs. three in five if full days). So, essentially, operational considerations exerted control over sales considerations. But more often, operations controls sales when it shouldn’t. The first, best way of thinking is to determine what situation will optimize sales, then try and figure out how to create that situation. More often, marketers decide on the situation that suits them or their employees or fits some industry norm, then try to create sales within its parameters.

A mistake made at Caesars Palace: they built a gigantic, new 4,000 seat showroom for Celine Dion. Next to it, is a giant Celine Dion store of souvenirs, music, clothing, etc. But the people exit the showroom down steps next to the store. They should be forced to exit through the store. (Disney rides, like Tower Of Terror at Disney/MGM exit through the souvenir store.) This is minutes in a store, and minutes translate to money.

You have to look carefully at how you manage your prospects’ or customers’ time. There is a three way linkage:


Classic involvement devices in direct-mail include the “affix these stamps to the card” Publishers Clearinghouse kind of mailing pieces. Opening sealed envelopes. Taking quizzes and tests. Even a trick used by Sugarman (and others): find the misspelled words, get the right count, win a prize. Some of these classics can move online or into other environments; some can’t. In retail, such things as trying on clothes or test driving a car. Maytag is testing stores where you bring in laundry and do it there, or cook in the in-store kitchen. The retail chain (also with a store in the Forum Shops) that gets this done through demonstration is Houdini’s Magic Shop. On my team, EVERYBODY made a purchase there – and they held us for about 30 minutes. Including the red room/blue room gambit: buy now, we’ll take you behind the curtain, in the back room and teach you to do the trick.

In-home party plan selling is making a huge comeback. Here’s why I’ve always liked it: every single person who takes the time to go to an in-home party, goes intending to buy something and does buy something; coming home empty-handed would seem like a waste of time! But instead of a quick walk-through of a store, the person is kept for two hours. Most buy multiples, spend more than they intended – because of the two hours. And the involvement: interaction with the salesperson and other customers, demonstration, looking through catalogs together – involvement. For the party plan business, INVOLVEMENT + TIME equals sales.

So, things to think about –

How can you get your prospect more invested in getting ready to buy from you and in selling himself, so the sale is more automatic, the customer will buy more, will pay more?

How can you get your prospect to invest more time reading, listening, watching, visiting?

How can you actively involve your prospect?

How can you create a buying experience?

About The Author: Dan Kennedy
Dan Kennedy is internationally recognized as the ‘Millionaire Maker,’ helping people in just about every category of business turn their ideas into fortunes. Dan’s “No B.S.” approach is refreshing amidst a world of small business marketing hype and enriches those who act on his advice. For more money-making marketing tips, tactics and strategies, go to www.DanKennedy.com

Working On Your Business, Not In It or… Being a Marketer, Not a Doer


The key to being a successful business is focusing your attention on moving it forward, rather than on keeping the current system producing…otherwise you’ll spend all day doing the same thing, day in and day out. I completely agree, but some days it just isn’t possible. Some days, I wake up with my list of things to do to grow my business and then, WHAM! My day is over and I accomplished none of those items. Sometimes meetings run late, or urgent projects come up, or something has gone wrong and must be fixed immediately. Whatever it is, it means another day that I have been in my business getting things done, but not working on it helping it to move forward.

Words of Wisdom From the Expert

Dan Kennedy – In Glazer-Kennedy Marketing you’ll realize that regardless of your business, you really are 
(and should be) in the marketing business. The first big leap in income occurs when a business owner moves 
from the thinking from himself as a “doer of his thing” to being a “marketer of his thing.” You may resist this 
at first due to accumulated experiences and habit of running your business in a certain way and thinking about 
yourself in a certain way, but as a Member you will shortly become liberated and arrive at the proper viewpoint 
of what business is all about. Dan Kennedy has created many other successful business owners from his teachings and they understand that not everyone can just give up the hands-on side of their business…and not all want to.


Diane Conklin – …you have to start to work ON your business instead of IN your business. So many of us when we start out, we have jobs, right? We may be working for hours from homes or we may have an office with our own business but what we really own is a job because we spend 6 or 8 or 10 or 12 or 15 hours a day doing it….

Now don’t think if you’re starting out, “Oh my gosh I have to stop”, you know baking pies, or have to stop grooming dogs because I think you started your business because you loved it. So as a marketer I should be saying you should love marketing, What I really think is if you got into the business because you love baking pies or grooming dogs or cleaning carpets, or whatever it is you did, it’s ok to keep doing that but you’ve got to find somebody that understands direct response marketing and can help you market your business.

Or find someone like me, who understands marketing, graphic design, web design and print!

Two Options To Move Forward With Your Business
  1. Make a plan to get out of being the ‘doer’ and into a plan of being the ‘marketer’. This is the part that can be frustrating, as you make the transition over. It is when you realize that you must be working ON your business, but can’t quite reach that point yet. Don’t worry, it won’t happen overnight but if you are persistent and create a plan, it will happen.
  2. Hire someone else to do your marketing and strategy. This is the alternative for those who either do not have the confidence or inclination to do the marketing – this is fine. It is also for those who actually prefer to be the ‘doer’ in their business; those who go into business in order to work for themselves and do the work as they wish. You may be an amazing pie maker and no one but you could do it quite right – then hire someone so that the world can find out. The vital thing is to recognize that there must be someone in your business who focuses most of their time on the marketing and business development part of the business.Whether this is you as the owner, or a specialist in the field that you hire, make sure that you are always adding more traffic into your funnel. I know many business owners (I admit, I have occasionally been guilty of this) who would go to networking events when they had the time and then become so busy they stopped all networking for months. Once business slowed down, out they were in the field again. This is not a viable model and the stop-start format of lead generation will never allow you to grow.

Which option works for you? Why? If it will be a while before you can transition, what can you do on a weekly or daily basis to slowly switch over?